Poems!!!!!

[Cloud101]

Ok! Time to express your self; post the poems that you've created!
I've only made one: Our bodies are the sun; our minds are the shadow; held back by the sun, the shadow waits to be set free. What do you think!? Your turn! :D

[Yoko Kurama]

Nice one. Short, but good. How about this: Love is...

Love is lost and found again
Love is dead and reborn again
Love is used and abused again
Love is secrets and lies again
Love is given and taken back again
Love is given back and out of reach again
Love is tough, but don't give up again
Love is watching and waiting again
Love is waiting and hoping again
Love is "there" by your side again
Love is what you wish
Love is Miyu and Yoko again
Love is...

How about we give ratings out of 10 for the poems. The person below rates the poem above. Is that ok???

[Cloud101]

Yeah, sure! 8/10

[Spec Highwind]

I rarely write poems in english, but I'll post these 3...
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I watch the dying star
And I remember how far
And I remember how long
I just keep the essence, and stay strong.

I observe the skies falling
Can’t help it, I’m just a being
Hope the sadness falls with it
Half dark, half light within.

I shake a three
I see the fruit reaching me
What would this world be
Without your love, without thee?

Hop, jump, try
I have to reach the sky
I’ll love you till I die
Never stopping for a moment, oh my!
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Grow, little girl, grow
Leave your wisdom everywhere you go
You’ll be happy, just need to know
That one day, you will love life so…

Fight, brave warrior, fight
You may cry when you feel the bright
You shall be free, if you wish, just think right
Acknowledge your duty with a glaring sight.

Fly, white birdie, fly
Beneath your feathers, a shy little guy
Winged by life, let me hear your cry
Raise your wings in a flight, feel the wind, try.

Write, glorious Me, write
Draw verses, lines, hymns and rhymes
Beg to the Nature, pray in a shrine
In pure harmony, like wind chimes
Green hope, hot love, like a fiery shine
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Oh, glorious goddess
Everyone sees her, no one knows her
Like a princess among her servants
Like perfection in a holy being
You’ll see her cross the rainbow
You’ll see her mystic flow
She can heal, she can harm
Also has magic in her Karma

Oh, glorious mistress
Enchanted maiden, love motives you
Hair like ashes, temper like blizzard
Clear, strong mind, like a wizard
Her eyes shine, like a flame’s core
She knows you, she wants more
Riding a wyvern
Oh, enchanted fairy!
Share your hold, oh, world that is scary.
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Comments are welcome

[John Smith]

Post some in Portuguese for me and Luis XD

[Yoko Kurama]

I give all three a 7/10 Spec. Very nice. I have no inspiration right now...someone else post a poem! :D

[Spec Highwind]

Post some in Portuguese for me and Luis XD

I don't know if it is correctly uploaded, but...

[Miyu_]

When did you write that poem, Yoko...?

[Avathar]

Wow, I wonder why there wasn't a thread like this before, 'cause, I've got tons of haikus o_O In Dutch though.. But I guess I can manage translating them without losing the feeling!

Here's one I wrote on my hand yesterday o_o quite an odd one, though.


I drank her warm juice.
And smoking her tobacco.
Living sensations.

[Cloud101]

Interesting...

[Andrew Scaves]

Greed is a concoction that can take a man's life
Avarice that can lead a nation to its reign or downfall
Obsession for power that can lead two men to engage their worlds into war
Greed, avarice a pure concoction of evil
It killed the mother of a noble
It ruined humainty and society
All because of two men's craving for power
Greed, avarice this is what it can do
Have no faith and you're willing to give in too

[Yoko Kurama]

That's good. 7/10. I need to do another poem.

[Avathar]

In the morning sun
The skies to be torn apart
By its radiance.


I dwell in the earth
Digging with my fingernails
So small and fragile.


We drove together
Each day through the same city
On our way to work.


Market athmosphere.
Nostalgic walks bring back thoughts
Precious memories.

A fire keeps burning
Passing by the elements
of life, death, and love.

[John Smith]

A fire keeps burning
Passing by the elements
of life, death, and love.

I like this part! O_o

[MiyuYamano]

Here's one of my favorites that I've writen. I'm thinking of entering it in a contest. Please, tell me what you all think!

~My New Found Fantasy~

A fantasy no more
It seems
Realitly has come this way
Fairies with wings and
Vamps with fangs
All use to haunt my dreams
Now it seems they're always with me
Watching my every move
Every corner I turn
Every street that Icross
Their eyes following me
What do they want?
What do they need?
Are they protecting me
Or just waiting for the perfect time
To make their move on me?
Positive spirts
Negative energies
What does this all mean?
Maybe you think
I'm losing my mind
But to me it seems
A fantasy no more
It seems
Reality has come this way

[Cloud101]

8/10 very nice, your mind is spreading its boundaries, and you can see this.

[Avathar]

It's happening soon
Once you and me will sit down
Our beliefs descend.

Thinking and drinking
Only time will tell the tale
That we're not alone.

That old memory
It is lying on the ground
But where have WE gone?

Like a museum
Men look back to ancient things
For they are worthy.

We won't fade away.
For this old recollection,
It will last the ages.

[Cloud101]

7/10, very nice.

[MiyuYamano]

Thank you, Bubba!! -giggles- I think that's the first time I've called you that.

[theDOCTOR]

Dreams Of You

I'm always dreaming of you,
because your all I think about,
but latley,
my dreams have turned into
nightmares, there's darkness
all around me,
and the only lightis from my heart.
I call out your name,
but you don't come,
because your not around to help,
so all I can do is give into the darkness,
because I cannot fight this battle alone.
But, what if it's not all just a dream,
what if it actually comes true.
Will you come if I call?
I just pray for that day to never come,
and, that I never have to fight alone.



I wrote this along time ago....wow!

[John Smith]

I don't know if it is correctly uploaded, but...

Spec, man, dude, guy, person, where do you get your inspiration from? :O You're a natural poet! :O

Fave poems: #1, #3 and #6.

Keep on, maybe when you get older you might write a book with poems! :cool:

[darkshadow2247]

Um...poetry? I get deep into my poems. Kennings, metaphors, imagery,
and allusions. How I love to write.

VIII

Embodied anger, waiting for release,
Stress compounded, the river Styx's new beast.
Promises broken. Hatred abound.
Nothing to calm me, nothing I've found.
Two hearts apart. An unfulfilled wish.
All three courses. Wrath the main dish.
Pondering sorrow. Unfathomable pain.
Internally clouded. Shattered vitality under rain.
All vision is blurred. None understand.
One knows. One takes command.
Like an eagle, she's here to my rescue.
Shrouded life, now into view.
Like the almighty Father, she comes and it's fixed.
No longer am I, caught betwixt.
To seal it all, given something divine.
Her hand for life. She wants to be mine.
Humbled knight's position. A dirtied knee.
2015, I'll give my plea.
Oh! 2015! Eight years stand.
Next to the left, two settings about a band.
Praying to that day, she'll be without "S".
Praying to that day, she'll see me as the best.
So much faith in my veins, it flows like the red and white.
Hope singing Hercules, concentrated might.
Atop my shoulders. In the back it'll be.
Dear Lord, I pray that she waits for me.

[Spec Highwind]

Spec, man, dude, guy, person, where do you get your inspiration from? :O You're a natural poet! :O

Fave poems: #1, #3 and #6.

Keep on, maybe when you get older you might write a book with poems! :cool:

Thanks ^^

[Andrew Scaves]

In the twist of her arms I feel love, warmth, and compassion.
In the twist of her arms I can hear the heart beating of a woman whom has suffered a great misery
In the twist of her arms I can sense the soul of a mother who longs for her child
In the twist of her arms I feel the tough,but soft skin of a valkyrie
In the twist of her arms we watch the sun set
In the twist of her arms she breathes gently down my neck
In the twist of her arms we ponder when our journey will end
In the twist of her arms I can finally rest

~The Wolf

[MiyuYamano]

.:Love Is Perfect:.

Love is kind
And love is sweet.
Love is two people
And that's all you need.
Love is undefined
But I still know what it is.
Love is special
And that's all you need to know.
Love is amazing
When you're with the right person.
Love is everything
Everything you need to know.
Love is life
And if you don't love,
What's the point in living?
Love is all I need.
Just the one I love
By my side forever more.
Love is just us
That's all we need.
Sometimes it's simple
And sometimes it's not.
Either way
Love is...
Perfect.

~~ Miyu

[Oolyan]

thats the poem she wrote/gave to me!

[MiyuYamano]

Yep yep!
That's it!!!

[Spec Highwind]

Hum... I wrote other poem in English...

Nothing special
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Foreign Inspiration

Thinking about writing
A poem, a Word, something
Can’t focus, void cleanses us
But it is not much of a problem
I’m not writing because I must
My will is the most lyrical
Words to paper, dust to dust
The impulse after the long fall

But as one word shines upon the others
My mind keeps falling, verse to verse, not metres
Mind and heart, rhyming together
I’m not falling, I’m floating!
I’m the words in the paper, my vice
Poetry’s a toy in the circle of life.

[blackstar]

I dont beleive in this world nothing happens here its boring and I have no control of my own destiny im pulled to and fro by the tides of lofe thats why I live in another world I only walk through this one like a phantom, in the other world is where I truely abide.

[Hydra]

Lol, poetry. =P

I ALWAYS wrote poetry in my teen days. XD

I'm a little cold
Watching events unfold
Haha, the story of you
Writing it isn't much to lose

Focus on the simple things
Like the chill the wind brings
Or watch the way the wind blows
And how red it makes your nose

Because you won't get a second chance
Again, to stand there, in that exact stance
You know you can't do that again
So this is the time your life begins

Take every second of it you can
Use all the time you have to plan
It may be the last time you can plan it
Shape your life as you see fit

You only get to live one time
And death is only the first sign
Of what is coming in the after life
So, stop trying to be nice

You know as well as I do
What amount of pressure that's on you
Look outside of the box
And release your inner locks.


AABB style, if anyone knows how to dig into poetry rules. =P

[blackstar]

Thats beautiful Hydra I just got chills reading that.

[Hydra]

Haha, it's just poetry.

With a little emotion, a child could write poetry. Especially AABB style. =P

Now the non-rhyming poetry with a deep meaning is hard to accomplish. It has to sound good with no rhymes, and have a solid meaning.

It's pretty hard, truthfully. <_<

Meh. I'll write another in a bit. =D

[blackstar]

Whats AABB style. (Im not much of a poet but my gf "Aiden" is a very good poet

[John Smith]

Lol, poetry. =P

I ALWAYS wrote poetry in my teen days. XD

I'm a little cold
Watching events unfold
Haha, the story of you
Writing it isn't much to lose

Focus on the simple things
Like the chill the wind brings
Or watch the way the wind blows
And how red it makes your nose

Because you won't get a second chance
Again, to stand there, in that exact stance
You know you can't do that again
So this is the time your life begins

Take every second of it you can
Use all the time you have to plan
It may be the last time you can plan it
Shape your life as you see fit

You only get to live one time
And death is only the first sign
Of what is coming in the after life
So, stop trying to be nice

You know as well as I do
What amount of pressure that's on you
Look outside of the box
And release your inner locks.


AABB style, if anyone knows how to dig into poetry rules. =P

Actually, I can sence (:D) a AABC DDEF GGHI JJKL MMNN :confused:

[Hydra]

Actually, I can sence (:D) a AABC DDEF GGHI JJKL MMNN :confused:
Yeah, that's the actual rhyme scheme though. =D

Same sense, in a way.

Guess this one, lol. XD It's fairly easy.

I just can't wait
For it to appear
In fact, being up to date
I hear what I want to hear

I don't need you
To tell me that it's there
Believe me, I'm not one of the few
That really couldn't care

My impatience is showing
And you hate it, right?
While my conscience is slowing
And our emotions fight

I don't get it
Why can't I wait?
Your stare burns, eyes alit
What answer do you want me to take?!

Do you want my soul?
Or do you want my love?
Do you want to take a hold?
Of my life, or none of the above?

Is this love true?
Or are you just playing with me?
I'll go with anything you do
And see what you want to see

I could see us going somewhere
But you're afraid of the idea of us
Well, you have to learn how to dare
My memories don't matter, don't gather up the dust

Let's start out fresh
Forget the past, okay?
I've always liked that dress
But that's because it's what you'd say.

[John Smith]

Yeah, that's the actual rhyme scheme though. =D

Same sense, in a way.

Guess this one, lol. XD It's fairly easy.

I just can't wait
For it to appear
In fact, being up to date
I hear what I want to hear

I don't need you
To tell me that it's there
Believe me, I'm not one of the few
That really couldn't care

My impatience is showing
And you hate it, right?
While my conscience is slowing
And our emotions fight

I don't get it
Why can't I wait?
Your stare burns, eyes alit
What answer do you want me to take?!

Do you want my soul?
Or do you want my love?
Do you want to take a hold?
Of my life, or none of the above?

Is this love true?
Or are you just playing with me?
I'll go with anything you do
And see what you want to see

I could see us going somewhere
But you're afraid of the idea of us
Well, you have to learn how to dare
My memories don't matter, don't gather up the dust

Let's start out fresh
Forget the past, okay?
I've always liked that dress
But that's because it's what you'd say.

The 1st four stances are ABAB, the other four are CDEF, or something like that :D

[SunshineyKailiana]

Alone in the darkness I felt,
Watching my soul slowly slip away.
Hope had almost left my mind
With it would my self would have gone.
Then hope came into my broken life
In just the right time.
And as I looked in his face,
I knew my life would turn around.

[Axel]

~Picking up the Leaves~

I've seen the great forests of the east
I've traveled the road of terrible struggles
I've faced my worst nightmare, and won
I've been slain by true love, but I yet lived
I've picked up the leaves of my past, my memories,
my broken heart, and everything I hold dear...
the wind continues to blow them away from my grasp.

-From Tragedy, By: Jhimian

[MiyuYamano]

Wheeee
Good poem there, Jhimian!

[Axel]

Poems are a way of voicing your opinion, but I have learned that it doesn't mean you'll all ways be heard. The important thing is to never give up a dream, no matter how many times you fail. Never give up.

[Arkacia]

Lots of talent in this thread. Now I"m going to ruin that run by posting something I wrote for another site. The story behind it, which is necessary for the poem to make sense, is imagine a great war involving many groups, but one group, ours, is neutral. There is discord within that group whether to stay neutral or join the war to help friend groups who are being defeated by a much larger and stronger enemy. The eagle is the symbol and mascot for our group.

The Eagle

On the edge of the precipice, a lone man stands
staring into the gloom below

Should he leap forth from his safe solid perch
and plummet down into the unknown

How did I get here, he thinks to himself
why can't I walk away?

What keeps me here, right on the rim?
can somebody please explain?

I watched the others stumble, leap or fall
down into that deep abyss

My friends, my enemies, one by one
till only I am left

I called out to them, and begged them no
don't leave me alone I cried

It is safe here at the top of the cliff
nobody needs to die

I hear them now, way down there
the prayers, the insults, and screams

Some begging for help, some cursing my name
and some warning me to leave

Pain and anger, joy and hope
take turns to float up to me

I feel the despair, and the satisfaction
in defeat or victory

What brought us all here to this accursed cliff?
that has ripped my soul in two

why must I choose to stand or fall?
when will I know what to do?

The lone man ponders on this for a while
as the sounds below became strident

Finally, he looks up at the sky
and sees a magnificent eagle flying

It is big, beautiful, bold, and free
neither asking permission nor giving

The lone man watches the bird with awe
and feels something within him brimming

The eagle looks down, right at the man
straight into his very heart

The loan man feels its presence there
and his gloom begins to depart

I know now what to do, he thinks to himself
the answer is clear as the sea

Follow the others, or not perhaps
but that decision is up to me

The leap is long and the fall is hard
Of my choice, I need to be sure

Because if do this wrong, either way
I won't be much help at all

The lone man slowly takes two steps back
away from the edge of the cliff

As the eagle circles high over his head
screeching its relief

[Doctor]

^ THAT was absolutely brilliant. You have superb talent.

And as for me, I have a poem...It's in my signature, actually. In english it reads:

Twilight reigns, fading into sky.
Darkness falls, you are there waiting.
I cannot see, for the night consumes my sight.
Crying, weeping, I cannot find you.
Your light is there, and mine is already gone.

[Hydra]

^ THAT was absolutely brilliant. You have superb talent.

And as for me, I have a poem...It's in my signature, actually. In english it reads:

Twilight reigns, fading into sky.
Darkness falls, you are there waiting.
I cannot see, for the night consumes my sight.
Crying, weeping, I cannot find you.
Your light is there, and mine is already gone.
I second that. That was magnificent. O.o

[Doctor]

The Shadow

A shadow hides behind me,
Creeping as I walk,
Growing ever closer,
Careful not to talk.
The sun sets in the distance,
Dusk moving in,
I turn to see the shadow's face,
Break out into a grin.
"Why do you follow me," I ask,
"At this time of night, what have you to do?"
The shadow answered, his laughter wicked,
"The nightmares I carry tonight, are especially for you!"
I sprint down the street,
My heart filled with fear,
"My darkest dreams, my thoughts of dread,
They have found me, they are here!"
Over fences and through bushes I run,
My face drenched in cold sweat,
The shadow's hand brushing my cheek;
But I have not been caught, not quite just yet!
For I have reached my home,
And I dart through the open door,
I quickly shut it; but no sigh of relief am I given,
For the shadow, my relentless pursuer,
Lies, his cackle ringing, his smile ever wider, on the floor.
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This was my first real attempt at a rhyming scheme. I thought I did a decent job, but it's not the best thing...The idea came from the fact that I hate walking home, alone, in the dark. I always feel as if I'm being watched, and whatever it is, it would chase me down no matter where I went. So I guess that's what sparked this poem...

[jedi geoff]

hehe heres one by me about me:

There once was a man named geoff
he had a sexy chest :D
all the girls liked him
they wanted to PASH HIM :D :D :D
and he wasnt a very good chef

its a limerick :)

[Doctor]

hehe heres one by me about me:

There once was a man named geoff
he had a sexy chest :D
all the girls liked him
they wanted to PASH HIM :D :D :D
and he wasnt a very good chef

its a limerick :)

Not a perfect limerick, but alright XD
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What defines me?
Is it the way I see things,
The way I look at the world
And its imperfections?

What defines me?
Is it how I hear when people speak
Of the things that matter,
And the things that do not?

What defines me?
Is it the subtle guestures,
Or the outstanding actions
That I use to try to make a difference?

What defines me?
Is it the daily things I do
To make my way through life,
And to try to achieve happiness?

What defines how I feel?
Is it the way you caress my face,
Or how my lips press against yours,
And that I think that no matter what I am,
All I need is my love for you?
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