Dracula's Unknown Sons III (Summary)

[Seyluv]

Never coming back

[Hydra]

So far, it's rather bland.

The grammatical errors are understandable. ^__^

Can't you Copy/Paste it? Well, if you typed it elsewhere anyway.

It's starting it quite nice, but also, it sounds like it's been done before. The idea I mean.

[Seyluv]

Yeah the whole put to sleep thing sucks, it kinda no orginal but thats all I can think of for now. it's a long long long play, why I said that is because out of all what the summary said i wrote 40 pages of the first few scenes. I'm on the part when Sue get betrayed by Grim and he loses his powers and kingdom.

[Hydra]

Oh, okay.

Oh, and FTR, mark spoilers when you reveal something important about the story. One of us on here might be interested in reading it when you decide to post it. =D

[Seyluv]

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