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Black Mage · 12-12-2005, 09:52 PM

Hey I'm starting a story that contains characters from Final Fantasy and stuff like that. The main charcters are well Black Mages like my avatar. They live in a Town called Element Town. The town is filled with only monsters and not one human is alound to enter the village. One day the town was attacked by warriors and was burnt to the ground. The only surrviver was a little mage named Mill. Mill is now a young boy who lives in a new town with foster parents. He now wants to set off on a journey to take revenge for his old village and friends and family he once had.

Some characters he will meet on his journey are: Cactuar, Chocobo, Goblins, and many other creatures of Final Fantasy

So any tips on what I should do with the story???? Please tell me.

12-12-2005, 09:52 PM	#1
Black Mage Vivi's Minder Join Date: Dec 2005 Age: 33 Posts: 44	Mage Stories Hey I'm starting a story that contains characters from Final Fantasy and stuff like that. The main charcters are well Black Mages like my avatar. They live in a Town called Element Town. The town is filled with only monsters and not one human is alound to enter the village. One day the town was attacked by warriors and was burnt to the ground. The only surrviver was a little mage named Mill. Mill is now a young boy who lives in a new town with foster parents. He now wants to set off on a journey to take revenge for his old village and friends and family he once had. Some characters he will meet on his journey are: Cactuar, Chocobo, Goblins, and many other creatures of Final Fantasy So any tips on what I should do with the story???? Please tell me. __________________ Someone looked into a black Mage's eyes and saw something. They didn't see a monster but, they saw monster who needed a friend. Visit the Black Mage Guild for more stories.