Kb's poems

kb-sama · 02-04-2008, 01:45 AM

K i'm going to post some of my Poems so Rate them say they suck just read them

And there are SOME spelling Mistakes in there so sorry

POEM ONE!!

The overlord (my first one)

an overlord i met today

an overlord grabed me and she said "hey"

with a sweat body and a kind mind

My glad I made the overlord mine.....

~kb-sama

POEM the 2nd! (it's cute)

NINJA!!

Ninja,Ninja in the sky

Don't come down and make me die...

With a Ninja Jump and a Ninja kick!

Down i go,super quick

Poem the 3rd (it's about a girl)

Min

Sweat Min,holding you feels so good it should be a sin
You make the pain go away being with you makes this a happy day
you help me sleep...you help you dream..you hold my even when i want to scream
your a goddess on earth and it makes me so happy that i'm your prech......

I love you dear Sweat Min....

Poem the 4th! (it is a bout a dragon)

The legend of the black Dragon...Fatalis

The legend of Death,
Death by a gaint Wyvern
has been Revived"

The legend of black Dragon

When the world is full of Dragons
the legend is revived
meat is eaten,bone is crunched'
and blood is sucked up dry

He burns the earth
and melts through iron
he boils the rivers
and mows down trees
he awakens the winds
and lights an inferno

He is Called Fatalis
the dragon of destiny
he is called Fatalis
the dargon of Destruction
Call for help
run for your lives
and don't forget to
pray to the skies

He is Called Fatalis
the dragon of destiny
he is called Fatalis
the dargon of Destruction
Fatalis,Fatalis
heaven and earth are yours
Fatalis,Fatalis
heaven and earth are yours

Poem the 5th

Tigrex

Look at him go,running around Messing with him i'll most likely end up 6 feet underground

Attacking like pac-man fighting this thing Ugh i'm a mad man,

Pull back my bow look at him go, and now he starts to glow....

OH crap,i say this was going to be my big day!

The Battle rages on as I hear the kick-ass Battle song

he's glowing again,this is it the end!

One hit was all it would take,to turn me in the hunter-cake!

but then the tigrex made a mistake, because of that mistake his live i take

i march in to town,then i here a sound,the sound of a roar.....oh goddess these more!

Poem the 6th

The demon Calamity Goddess (the quickening of fate)

Her soul is calm,her mind is set the end of man comes tonight.....

Her job you must see is to bring about the end of you and me

Her body is tan, sainted that way form the blood she has spilled

She summons her demons and they will attack,rip out are hearts,break are backs

she will stand there and watch this mission was not her Call God said so now we must fall

she stand there her heart riped in two,for the world she loved she must bring about it's doom

She is called Calamity,the bringer of mankind's destiny

The kind maiden's task is to make this are last....

When she is done so will be life,no point to run,no point to cry,just lay there,lay there and wait to die

She is called Calamity,the bringer of mankind's destiny......

~kb-sama

Love it

kb-sama · 02-04-2008, 04:00 PM

UPDATE!!! Poem the 7th

Ninja!!!!!2(kind love like)

Miss Ninja why you jump so high?

do you think if your on land you'll die?

If you land you wanna hug?

Hey come down now and teach me the way!

So i can jump high with you and we can be ninja all day

~kb-sama

Bonesplitter · 02-04-2008, 04:29 PM

hmm...i think you have WAY to much time on your hands...

i liked all of your poems...kind of strange...but in a good way

kb-sama · 02-04-2008, 04:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Bonesplitter

hmm...i think you have WAY to much time on your hands...

i liked all of your poems...kind of strange...but in a good way

Thanks what was your fave?

Bonesplitter · 02-04-2008, 04:54 PM

The legend of the black Dragon...Fatalis

i liked that one

kb-sama · 02-04-2008, 04:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Bonesplitter

The legend of the black Dragon...Fatalis

i liked that one

Evey one loves that one

Bonesplitter · 02-04-2008, 04:56 PM

duh...its about a dragon

kb-sama · 02-04-2008, 04:58 PM

A very evil Dargon..and i guess Naming it Fatalis just made him more cool

Bonesplitter · 02-04-2008, 05:06 PM

yes...yes it did make it cooler

kb-sama · 02-04-2008, 05:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bonesplitter

yes...yes it did make it cooler

Hmmmm...Realy?

kb-sama · 02-05-2008, 12:16 PM

UPDATE POEM THE 8th

~Diablo

The beast will come On this Day,Hell bent to have it's way

Are body's will be riped are blood spilled and life's ended just so this day

God will save us the church man scream,not knowing that this is HIS Plan

Heroes run in,and quickly they die there Blood Spilled to the azure sky

Hope runs thin as they march,there evil Dark march

God won't save us that is true to stop Diablo it's a up to you.....

~kb-sama

Doctor · 02-06-2008, 10:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kb-sama

A very evil Dargon..and i guess Naming it Fatalis just made him more cool

You plagarized that poem, KB. It's not even a poem; it's the translated lyrics from a song in Monster Hunter. REMEMBER? Or did you forget? Or did you lie when you told me what it was yourself before?

You can't post it and say that it's yours. =[

**Phoenix Flame** · 02-15-2008, 05:25 AM

oooooohhhh. The truth comes out. 0.0!

Edit: I liked the ninja poem x3

kb-sama · 02-18-2008, 10:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phoenix Flame

oooooohhhh. The truth comes out. 0.0!

Edit: I liked the ninja poem x3

Shut up

and Witch Ninja One?

kb-sama · 02-18-2008, 11:15 PM

Poem the 9th

Maye's Last Stand (tryed to be more Dark with this one)

She Picks up Her Sword,Puts on her Armor,slides on her Gauntlets,and fills her bag with Items,for sure This is Her last hour

She Heads to the Ruined Tower,this poor girl Must Face a god on this hour,she Said goodbye to the ones she loved,set Free for Beloved dove ,for soon Her life will End At the Hands of the Fiend of men

Her task was Forced on her,"Slay the God,or we kill your Mother" her Heart is Heavy,Her mind Blank,to die So young is a mistake ,near the top she is she had one day hoped to have a Family,a son a Daughter,but Soon she will Be Slaughtered

She is now at the top and See this Beast,it's body White,it's Eyes Blood Red,Rain Starts to fall Lighting and Thunder,but with one yell from the Beast it Stops,maye's Mind is Racked with fear for Soon the Beast Draws Near

She Run at the Fiend,sword in the Air,She Hit Hard,but she is Smacked into the Air,She hit The Ground Hard,now with blood running down her Face,The Fiend Walks Her way licking it's lips,she Grabs Her Sword,And hit it's Chest,But her Sword Snaps in Half,But it Rips the Beast's Chest open and it's blood Splaters Over her

She has Won,she starts to Walk away,But to Maye's dismay The Fiend Still Lives,The Rain Starts again,The Beast march's to her,She falls to the Ground and Starts to Sob,The Beast Grabs Her and Starts to Crush her,Maye Ribs Break,she Starts to Hack blood,The God of the Sky Slams her Down,she Hit the Ground with a Sicking Sound,"Mother" Maye Said weakly,Her Body Broken,"I'm sorry............"

And Poor Maye Was the First To Fall to the King Of Disaster............White Fatalis

02-04-2008, 01:45 AM	#1
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 35 Posts: 2,769	Kb's poems K i'm going to post some of my Poems so Rate them say they suck just read them And there are SOME spelling Mistakes in there so sorry POEM ONE!! The overlord (my first one) an overlord i met today an overlord grabed me and she said "hey" with a sweat body and a kind mind My glad I made the overlord mine..... ~kb-sama POEM the 2nd! (it's cute) NINJA!! Ninja,Ninja in the sky Don't come down and make me die... With a Ninja Jump and a Ninja kick! Down i go,super quick Poem the 3rd (it's about a girl) Min Sweat Min,holding you feels so good it should be a sin You make the pain go away being with you makes this a happy day you help me sleep...you help you dream..you hold my even when i want to scream your a goddess on earth and it makes me so happy that i'm your prech...... I love you dear Sweat Min.... Poem the 4th! (it is a bout a dragon) The legend of the black Dragon...Fatalis The legend of Death, Death by a gaint Wyvern has been Revived" The legend of black Dragon When the world is full of Dragons the legend is revived meat is eaten,bone is crunched' and blood is sucked up dry He burns the earth and melts through iron he boils the rivers and mows down trees he awakens the winds and lights an inferno He is Called Fatalis the dragon of destiny he is called Fatalis the dargon of Destruction Call for help run for your lives and don't forget to pray to the skies He is Called Fatalis the dragon of destiny he is called Fatalis the dargon of Destruction Fatalis,Fatalis heaven and earth are yours Fatalis,Fatalis heaven and earth are yours Poem the 5th Tigrex Look at him go,running around Messing with him i'll most likely end up 6 feet underground Attacking like pac-man fighting this thing Ugh i'm a mad man, Pull back my bow look at him go, and now he starts to glow.... OH crap,i say this was going to be my big day! The Battle rages on as I hear the kick-ass Battle song he's glowing again,this is it the end! One hit was all it would take,to turn me in the hunter-cake! but then the tigrex made a mistake, because of that mistake his live i take i march in to town,then i here a sound,the sound of a roar.....oh goddess these more! Poem the 6th The demon Calamity Goddess (the quickening of fate) Her soul is calm,her mind is set the end of man comes tonight..... Her job you must see is to bring about the end of you and me Her body is tan, sainted that way form the blood she has spilled She summons her demons and they will attack,rip out are hearts,break are backs she will stand there and watch this mission was not her Call God said so now we must fall she stand there her heart riped in two,for the world she loved she must bring about it's doom She is called Calamity,the bringer of mankind's destiny The kind maiden's task is to make this are last.... When she is done so will be life,no point to run,no point to cry,just lay there,lay there and wait to die She is called Calamity,the bringer of mankind's destiny...... ~kb-sama Love it __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on"

02-04-2008, 04:00 PM	#2
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 35 Posts: 2,769	Re: Kb's poems UPDATE!!! Poem the 7th Ninja!!!!!2(kind love like) Miss Ninja why you jump so high? do you think if your on land you'll die? If you land you wanna hug? Hey come down now and teach me the way! So i can jump high with you and we can be ninja all day ~kb-sama __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on"

02-04-2008, 04:29 PM	#3
Bonesplitter Lord of the Dead Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: at the computer....sometimes Age: 33 Posts: 317	Re: Kb's poems hmm...i think you have WAY to much time on your hands... i liked all of your poems...kind of strange...but in a good way __________________ They all come to me in the end

02-04-2008, 04:54 PM	#5
Bonesplitter Lord of the Dead Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: at the computer....sometimes Age: 33 Posts: 317	Re: Kb's poems The legend of the black Dragon...Fatalis i liked that one __________________ They all come to me in the end

02-04-2008, 04:56 PM	#7
Bonesplitter Lord of the Dead Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: at the computer....sometimes Age: 33 Posts: 317	Re: Kb's poems duh...its about a dragon __________________ They all come to me in the end

02-04-2008, 04:58 PM	#8
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 35 Posts: 2,769	Re: Kb's poems A very evil Dargon..and i guess Naming it Fatalis just made him more cool __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on"

02-04-2008, 05:06 PM	#9
Bonesplitter Lord of the Dead Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: at the computer....sometimes Age: 33 Posts: 317	Re: Kb's poems yes...yes it did make it cooler __________________ They all come to me in the end

02-05-2008, 12:16 PM	#11
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 35 Posts: 2,769	Re: Kb's poems UPDATE POEM THE 8th ~Diablo The beast will come On this Day,Hell bent to have it's way Are body's will be riped are blood spilled and life's ended just so this day God will save us the church man scream,not knowing that this is HIS Plan Heroes run in,and quickly they die there Blood Spilled to the azure sky Hope runs thin as they march,there evil Dark march God won't save us that is true to stop Diablo it's a up to you..... ~kb-sama __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on"

02-15-2008, 05:25 AM	#13
Phoenix Flame Go Umbarbar do my bidding Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By myself. It's lonely ;-; Posts: 3,044	Re: Kb's poems oooooohhhh. The truth comes out. 0.0! Edit: I liked the ninja poem x3 __________________ Fight, if there is something to fight for. Never give in, or give up - but ALWAYS give. Choose your battles wisely. You only get one shot at life. Follow your heart.

02-18-2008, 11:15 PM	#15
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 35 Posts: 2,769	Re: Kb's poems Poem the 9th Maye's Last Stand (tryed to be more Dark with this one) She Picks up Her Sword,Puts on her Armor,slides on her Gauntlets,and fills her bag with Items,for sure This is Her last hour She Heads to the Ruined Tower,this poor girl Must Face a god on this hour,she Said goodbye to the ones she loved,set Free for Beloved dove ,for soon Her life will End At the Hands of the Fiend of men Her task was Forced on her,"Slay the God,or we kill your Mother" her Heart is Heavy,Her mind Blank,to die So young is a mistake ,near the top she is she had one day hoped to have a Family,a son a Daughter,but Soon she will Be Slaughtered She is now at the top and See this Beast,it's body White,it's Eyes Blood Red,Rain Starts to fall Lighting and Thunder,but with one yell from the Beast it Stops,maye's Mind is Racked with fear for Soon the Beast Draws Near She Run at the Fiend,sword in the Air,She Hit Hard,but she is Smacked into the Air,She hit The Ground Hard,now with blood running down her Face,The Fiend Walks Her way licking it's lips,she Grabs Her Sword,And hit it's Chest,But her Sword Snaps in Half,But it Rips the Beast's Chest open and it's blood Splaters Over her She has Won,she starts to Walk away,But to Maye's dismay The Fiend Still Lives,The Rain Starts again,The Beast march's to her,She falls to the Ground and Starts to Sob,The Beast Grabs Her and Starts to Crush her,Maye Ribs Break,she Starts to Hack blood,The God of the Sky Slams her Down,she Hit the Ground with a Sicking Sound,"Mother" Maye Said weakly,Her Body Broken,"I'm sorry............" And Poor Maye Was the First To Fall to the King Of Disaster............White Fatalis __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on"

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