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08-06-2007, 10:51 PM | #16 |
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Better yet. I'm bored, so I'll write a brand new one, just exclusive here.
"The Wait" "Can we start things off anew? Or are you afraid to see my face? All the things we've been through Are the big things put to waste? Now don't tell me you hate me Deep down inside, that is a lie You don't know what you see Or you fib just to get yourself by You're a disgrace of a being Couldn't love you any more Since I knew you were leaving And my heart was just the door So, what to say, what to do So many words can't be spoken And they're directed at you Pick up the pieces that're broken Or possibly, leave them alone Don't need any more "sympathy" For what we've done, I can't atone Will you please leave me be? Because I love you very, very much And I can't stop thinking of your face How gentle your hands, and your touch To know that time's been put to waste It's just a hurt that won't go away I think I can endure the big wait I have to reassure myself each day 'Cause my words were a little late And now you're gone from my life For years, if not for a tiny little bit I guess the best can only suffice Finally I can see that you aren't it." Um, um, yeah. That's not rly good compared to other stuff. But yah. It's something, I guess.
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08-07-2007, 03:45 PM | #17 |
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well the one poem you let me read was better, but not by alot.
this one looks fine to me. but uhm any wayz i wrote one last night... it was storming and it knocked our power out, so i went outside at 2 in the morning and played in the rain. =] it was fun. i didn't get hit by lighting. good news, eh? but i was half asleep when i wrote this so don't yell at me if it sucks. XD "Dance in the Rain" "The rain poured down, washed away all her fears. She danced in the rain, invisible were her tears. The lighting flashed, and thunder clashed, but she was not afraid. for she drowned in her thoughts, on the wet ground where she laid. It was a sunless heaven, like a moonless night. She forgot about her problems, was joyful without might. So everyday from then, with a problem to amend, to escape from all the pain... She danced out in the rain."
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08-07-2007, 05:25 PM | #18 |
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LOLKAT, AM YELLING AT YOU.
I just don't like the rhyme scheme. Or how short it is. Otherwise, it's really good. =O
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08-07-2007, 05:30 PM | #19 |
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all my poems are short.
0_o and all my poems rhyme. XD
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08-07-2007, 05:38 PM | #20 |
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WoW I liked Kats alot and hydra yours was really good to yours sounded like it could be a song.
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08-07-2007, 05:40 PM | #21 |
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*points at hydra*
HAHA. MINES BETTER. XDD j/k ^_^
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08-07-2007, 06:07 PM | #22 |
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:O
Meanie. Yers is good though. XD
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08-07-2007, 07:10 PM | #23 |
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Oh, you write poetry too, my friends! Reading poetry in a language that is not yours can get boring
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08-07-2007, 07:38 PM | #24 |
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no..i don't write.
thats only the second poem i ever wrote. its not really my thing. but when my feelings build up its a good way to let it out. =_=
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08-07-2007, 10:36 PM | #26 | |
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ME TOO. Actually, I'll write stuff like the thing I wrote at the beginning of the page just to write. And as you can see, it's not too good. :3 Then some days I need to write, to let out mah feelings, and it's really good. Like the one I showed Kat. =O!
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08-08-2007, 01:05 AM | #27 | |
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08-08-2007, 12:36 PM | #29 |
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I can write on the spot. But it won't be too good. Not like this:
Can't Say "I wish I could just tell you how I feel About this whole confusing predicament But doing that is like a spinning wheel On a gun, in a game of Russian roulette There's a chance your eyes will open And you'll behold the truth you will see Or maybe our feelings will only loosen Then you'll be even more mad with me The outcomes are more good than bad That, I can very much assure is true But when you're truly serious, I'll be glad Either way, I'm happy it came from you You say you love, but you don't You'll keep your love, but you wont Do you see what I'm trying to do? Or do I have to spell it out to you? You know we both hate picking sides Because of the anger we know lies Under the surface, which'll pop out Then we'll see what the truth is about I'm pretty sure I can love you now But is it something that you'll allow? Half the time I really think it's too late Other times, I'll let go of this biding hate And tell you how I finally feel about it Not afraid of your reaction, or effects You're telling me the happiness you emit Was just a cheap, fake emotion of defect? It's time for ME to come off of the sidelines And to get my hands dirty, as much as they can When you find out how much I really shine You can decide or not, if you want to hold my hand And help me through what I believe is hell Probably the worst thing that's ever happened If you're telling me you can't help me, well, I'll look to God, like His words make me destined To fight for what I want, and NEVER give in If I give in, and let in the sin, then we can't win Then, as always, you'll make a grave mistake Which you think is right, and your heart will ache Either road you choose, there's someone to hold onto So I'm not trying to pick sides, and put pressure on you But the things you realize when you decide not to dwell You might as well go back two years and holler for that hell I feel it now, I know what it's like, and I see now it hurts I couldn't speak, but now I want to be on the highest alert Going to be watching you two, and get those thoughts again If you're happy, grand, but if not, then dear, please say when I'm not telling you to reconsider altogether, for I respect you both It's just you said, if you try this early, and expect it to work, it just can't I won't try to steal you over like I could do, and I'll start my growth I'm confused, and trying to hold back logic; These emotions enchant I'm beginning my walk with God, and I've never felt any more better You're currently walking, and honey, I now see you need to see There's still time to change the road you're on; No feelings have to falter I'm not just saying me; I want you to be the best ever could be. " That was written last month. July 10th, actually. I didn't know it was THAT long ago. Dang, I need to write some moar good stuff. D:
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08-08-2007, 09:03 PM | #30 |
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I can't not stand writing poetry...Whether its out of my own free will to see what I can come up with or its being forced on me I steer clear of it because it just upsets me! But on the other hand I love love love! to read it. Or hear it like spoken work poetry. Now that is some talent. Anybody who does spoken word poetry all the props to ya.
And to all my good friends on ffnet! I LOVE YOU!! When I have nobody to talk to here at home I know I can always turn to somebody here at my second home.
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