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12-11-2006, 11:24 AM
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The Dark Guardian
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Poems!!!!!
Ok! Time to express your self; post the poems that you've created!
I've only made one: Our bodies are the sun; our minds are the shadow; held back by the sun, the shadow waits to be set free. What do you think!? Your turn! 
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12-11-2006, 11:31 AM
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With a shattered heart...
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Nice one. Short, but good. How about this: Love is...
Love is lost and found again Love is dead and reborn again Love is used and abused again Love is secrets and lies again Love is given and taken back again Love is given back and out of reach again Love is tough, but don't give up again Love is watching and waiting again Love is waiting and hoping again Love is "there" by your side again Love is what you wish Love is Miyu and Yoko again Love is... How about we give ratings out of 10 for the poems. The person below rates the poem above. Is that ok??? Last edited by yoko_kurama; 12-11-2006 at 11:33 AM. |
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12-11-2006, 11:34 AM
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The Dark Guardian
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Yeah, sure! 8/10
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12-11-2006, 02:57 PM
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The Portuguese Dragoon
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Re: Poems!!!!!
I rarely write poems in english, but I'll post these 3...
---------------------------------------- I watch the dying star And I remember how far And I remember how long I just keep the essence, and stay strong. I observe the skies falling Can’t help it, I’m just a being Hope the sadness falls with it Half dark, half light within. I shake a three I see the fruit reaching me What would this world be Without your love, without thee? Hop, jump, try I have to reach the sky I’ll love you till I die Never stopping for a moment, oh my! ---------------------------------------- Grow, little girl, grow Leave your wisdom everywhere you go You’ll be happy, just need to know That one day, you will love life so… Fight, brave warrior, fight You may cry when you feel the bright You shall be free, if you wish, just think right Acknowledge your duty with a glaring sight. Fly, white birdie, fly Beneath your feathers, a shy little guy Winged by life, let me hear your cry Raise your wings in a flight, feel the wind, try. Write, glorious Me, write Draw verses, lines, hymns and rhymes Beg to the Nature, pray in a shrine In pure harmony, like wind chimes Green hope, hot love, like a fiery shine ---------------------------------------- Oh, glorious goddess Everyone sees her, no one knows her Like a princess among her servants Like perfection in a holy being You’ll see her cross the rainbow You’ll see her mystic flow She can heal, she can harm Also has magic in her Karma Oh, glorious mistress Enchanted maiden, love motives you Hair like ashes, temper like blizzard Clear, strong mind, like a wizard Her eyes shine, like a flame’s core She knows you, she wants more Riding a wyvern Oh, enchanted fairy! Share your hold, oh, world that is scary. ---------------------------------------- Comments are welcome
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12-11-2006, 04:51 PM
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~Wizard~
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Post some in Portuguese for me and Luis XD
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12-11-2006, 05:22 PM
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With a shattered heart...
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Re: Poems!!!!!
I give all three a 7/10 Spec. Very nice. I have no inspiration right now...someone else post a poem!
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12-11-2006, 05:51 PM
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The Portuguese Dragoon
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Quote:
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12-11-2006, 07:21 PM
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Vivi's Minder
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Re: Poems!!!!!
When did you write that poem, Yoko...?
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12-11-2006, 07:52 PM
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"GET YOUR NAILS DONE!!"
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Wow, I wonder why there wasn't a thread like this before, 'cause, I've got tons of haikus o_O In Dutch though.. But I guess I can manage translating them without losing the feeling!
Here's one I wrote on my hand yesterday o_o quite an odd one, though. I drank her warm juice. And smoking her tobacco. Living sensations. |
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12-12-2006, 11:48 AM
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The Dark Guardian
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Interesting...
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12-12-2006, 12:10 PM
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Moogle Farmer
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Greed is a concoction that can take a man's life
Avarice that can lead a nation to its reign or downfall Obsession for power that can lead two men to engage their worlds into war Greed, avarice a pure concoction of evil It killed the mother of a noble It ruined humainty and society All because of two men's craving for power Greed, avarice this is what it can do Have no faith and you're willing to give in too
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12-12-2006, 12:28 PM
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With a shattered heart...
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Re: Poems!!!!!
That's good. 7/10. I need to do another poem.
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12-12-2006, 08:10 PM
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Re: Poems!!!!!
In the morning sun
The skies to be torn apart By its radiance. I dwell in the earth Digging with my fingernails So small and fragile. We drove together Each day through the same city On our way to work. Market athmosphere. Nostalgic walks bring back thoughts Precious memories. A fire keeps burning Passing by the elements of life, death, and love. |
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12-12-2006, 08:12 PM
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~Wizard~
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Re: Poems!!!!!
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12-13-2006, 07:33 PM
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Fruits Basket Lover
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Re: Poems!!!!!
Here's one of my favorites that I've writen. I'm thinking of entering it in a contest. Please, tell me what you all think!
~My New Found Fantasy~ A fantasy no more It seems Realitly has come this way Fairies with wings and Vamps with fangs All use to haunt my dreams Now it seems they're always with me Watching my every move Every corner I turn Every street that Icross Their eyes following me What do they want? What do they need? Are they protecting me Or just waiting for the perfect time To make their move on me? Positive spirts Negative energies What does this all mean? Maybe you think I'm losing my mind But to me it seems A fantasy no more It seems Reality has come this way |
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