Poems!!!!!

[Cloud101]

8/10 very nice, your mind is spreading its boundaries, and you can see this.

[Avathar]

It's happening soon
Once you and me will sit down
Our beliefs descend.

Thinking and drinking
Only time will tell the tale
That we're not alone.

That old memory
It is lying on the ground
But where have WE gone?

Like a museum
Men look back to ancient things
For they are worthy.

We won't fade away.
For this old recollection,
It will last the ages.

[Cloud101]

7/10, very nice.

[MiyuYamano]

Thank you, Bubba!! -giggles- I think that's the first time I've called you that.

[theDOCTOR]

Dreams Of You

I'm always dreaming of you,
because your all I think about,
but latley,
my dreams have turned into
nightmares, there's darkness
all around me,
and the only lightis from my heart.
I call out your name,
but you don't come,
because your not around to help,
so all I can do is give into the darkness,
because I cannot fight this battle alone.
But, what if it's not all just a dream,
what if it actually comes true.
Will you come if I call?
I just pray for that day to never come,
and, that I never have to fight alone.



I wrote this along time ago....wow!

[John Smith]

Originally Posted by Spec

I don't know if it is correctly uploaded, but...

Spec, man, dude, guy, person, where do you get your inspiration from? :O You're a natural poet! :O

Fave poems: #1, #3 and #6.

Keep on, maybe when you get older you might write a book with poems!

[darkshadow2247]

Um...poetry? I get deep into my poems. Kennings, metaphors, imagery,
and allusions. How I love to write.

VIII

Embodied anger, waiting for release,
Stress compounded, the river Styx's new beast.
Promises broken. Hatred abound.
Nothing to calm me, nothing I've found.
Two hearts apart. An unfulfilled wish.
All three courses. Wrath the main dish.
Pondering sorrow. Unfathomable pain.
Internally clouded. Shattered vitality under rain.
All vision is blurred. None understand.
One knows. One takes command.
Like an eagle, she's here to my rescue.
Shrouded life, now into view.
Like the almighty Father, she comes and it's fixed.
No longer am I, caught betwixt.
To seal it all, given something divine.
Her hand for life. She wants to be mine.
Humbled knight's position. A dirtied knee.
2015, I'll give my plea.
Oh! 2015! Eight years stand.
Next to the left, two settings about a band.
Praying to that day, she'll be without "S".
Praying to that day, she'll see me as the best.
So much faith in my veins, it flows like the red and white.
Hope singing Hercules, concentrated might.
Atop my shoulders. In the back it'll be.
Dear Lord, I pray that she waits for me.

[Spec Highwind]

Originally Posted by John Smith

Spec, man, dude, guy, person, where do you get your inspiration from? :O You're a natural poet! :O

Fave poems: #1, #3 and #6.

Keep on, maybe when you get older you might write a book with poems!

Thanks ^^

[Andrew Scaves]

In the twist of her arms I feel love, warmth, and compassion.
In the twist of her arms I can hear the heart beating of a woman whom has suffered a great misery
In the twist of her arms I can sense the soul of a mother who longs for her child
In the twist of her arms I feel the tough,but soft skin of a valkyrie
In the twist of her arms we watch the sun set
In the twist of her arms she breathes gently down my neck
In the twist of her arms we ponder when our journey will end
In the twist of her arms I can finally rest

~The Wolf

[MiyuYamano]

.:Love Is Perfect:.

Love is kind
And love is sweet.
Love is two people
And that's all you need.
Love is undefined
But I still know what it is.
Love is special
And that's all you need to know.
Love is amazing
When you're with the right person.
Love is everything
Everything you need to know.
Love is life
And if you don't love,
What's the point in living?
Love is all I need.
Just the one I love
By my side forever more.
Love is just us
That's all we need.
Sometimes it's simple
And sometimes it's not.
Either way
Love is...
Perfect.

~~ Miyu

[Oolyan]

thats the poem she wrote/gave to me!

[MiyuYamano]

Yep yep!
That's it!!!

[Spec Highwind]

Hum... I wrote other poem in English...

Nothing special
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Foreign Inspiration

Thinking about writing
A poem, a Word, something
Can’t focus, void cleanses us
But it is not much of a problem
I’m not writing because I must
My will is the most lyrical
Words to paper, dust to dust
The impulse after the long fall

But as one word shines upon the others
My mind keeps falling, verse to verse, not metres
Mind and heart, rhyming together
I’m not falling, I’m floating!
I’m the words in the paper, my vice
Poetry’s a toy in the circle of life.

[blackstar]

I dont beleive in this world nothing happens here its boring and I have no control of my own destiny im pulled to and fro by the tides of lofe thats why I live in another world I only walk through this one like a phantom, in the other world is where I truely abide.

[Hydra]

Lol, poetry. =P

I ALWAYS wrote poetry in my teen days. XD

I'm a little cold
Watching events unfold
Haha, the story of you
Writing it isn't much to lose

Focus on the simple things
Like the chill the wind brings
Or watch the way the wind blows
And how red it makes your nose

Because you won't get a second chance
Again, to stand there, in that exact stance
You know you can't do that again
So this is the time your life begins

Take every second of it you can
Use all the time you have to plan
It may be the last time you can plan it
Shape your life as you see fit

You only get to live one time
And death is only the first sign
Of what is coming in the after life
So, stop trying to be nice

You know as well as I do
What amount of pressure that's on you
Look outside of the box
And release your inner locks.


AABB style, if anyone knows how to dig into poetry rules. =P