The Friends of FFnet - Page 5

Doctor · 10-19-2007, 02:45 AM

Blackstar and Hydra...you guys should do a poem together--you kick so much ass at it. XD;

Leon · 10-24-2007, 03:50 AM

Perhaps join our new RP if intrested
Both of you are skilled and I enjoyed reading your poems

Hydra · 10-24-2007, 12:10 PM

I've been thinking about it, actually. It'd be fun, but I'm not sure if I have the time to really follow up, heh. I'll give you my answer in a little bit.

blackstar · 10-25-2007, 05:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leon

This is my own (first and last)

The Darkened Ones

Unlike news and tales, the sword is trustier
Whitens the tainted pages of history
A sharp blade's edge between sincere and liar
Force out the truth, banish the forgery

The flicker of spears in the sun
Reflecting the ember in the protector's heart
Now breathing its last against the gun
The ancient lands' hope is so far

Long was the field safe from assault
Flowers and flora was the land's dress
Bliss spreading ...nevermore. At who's fault?
Taken harmony is now restored by death

Judging themselves worthier of your land
Taken away from where you belonged
Lying to the world, ensuring your end
Like a star's blaze, their plunder can't be owned

In the eyes of the world, they filled you with darkness
"Eliminate the threat, slaughter the darkened ones"
Time can only observe the chaos and the foulness
Like past, and future, with faith they shall be gone

Take arms, like your predecessors and hold the tradition
Uphold the legacy, of your land's sanctuary. It must be done
Being where you belong, believe it's worth perdition
For your loved ones and own successors; Arise… darkened ones

"Committed to all those fighting tyranny to regain their home lands now raped away from them, words might not inflict damage or expel cruelty, but hope does"

You should be a song writer this really sounds like a power metal song.
You really think im that talented you should hear some of my girl friends poems they really are amazing i dont know if she would let me post some of them though.

Leon · 10-25-2007, 07:50 PM

Well thanks, but sorry to tell you that metal music doesn't intrest me much
anyway, feel free to post whatever you want, I enjoy reading poems

blackstar · 10-26-2007, 11:15 AM

Yeah it doesnt alot of people but it sounded like a Nightwish or Blind Guardian song to me just a random observation. So who are your favorite poets?

Leon · 10-26-2007, 11:43 AM

Well it's a variety, but I favor Maya Angelou, Arthur Rimbaud, E.E. Cummings, and Robert Frost.

Edit: Forgot to add an unknown legendary warrior/poet whom I look up to Antarah ibn Shaddad, and to ask for everybody else's favourite poets

blackstar · 11-19-2007, 06:30 PM

Poe, im limited with Frost but honestly my gf is my favorite poet no joke shes really really good.

blackstar · 12-12-2007, 12:32 AM

I reread my poem and it makes me really sad now seeing all the people who are gone. I really wish i knew how to get a hold of them. Tifa, Gackt, Empress,

WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GUYS!

Bonesplitter · 01-24-2008, 08:18 PM

this a poem i did about 4 months ago

empty
im empty in side, theirs nothing left.
my heart has been broken into tiny
bits. i only found a piece. i gave
that piece to someone i thought would
fix it, repair it, make it whole again.
i was wrong. i lost that piece forever, and
with it...my heart. im empty and
dead inside...no...theres something
in me, something i want to let out, something
i must let out, something im afriad to
let out...but...if i keep it locked
up it will hurt me. it will hurt others.
the light of my soul has burned out, im
an empty vessel. im alwas in pain.
i dont want to be in pain. when im
almost better i see her.
she took the the only happiness
i ever had. she ropped it out and killed it.
i try to get away, i want to get away.
i dont know why i still think of it,of her, and
i wonder why do i hope of things i dont
want, of things i think i dont want, but
i know tha answer

i wan my heart back, i want to let the pain
out. i want someone to help me...
i just want someone...

Leon · 01-26-2008, 05:35 AM

Nice poem Bonesplitter, I liked its simplicity

blackstar · 01-26-2008, 02:08 PM

You do have a heart Colton

that was really good though im impressed you never really caught me as the poetic type.

kb-sama · 01-27-2008, 01:00 AM

kb did one to!!!

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an overlord i met today

an overlord grabed me and she said "hey"

with a sweat body and a kind mind

My glad I made the overlord mine.....

~kb-sama

Ok i made two

Ninja,Ninja in the sky

Don't come down and make me die...

With a Ninja Jump and a Ninja kick!

Down i go,super quick

not much but it's poem right?

**Phoenix Flame** · 01-27-2008, 05:55 AM

The Ninja poem made me giggle x3

kb-sama · 01-27-2008, 06:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phoenix Flame

The Ninja poem made me giggle x3

Thanks

10-19-2007, 02:45 AM	#61
Doctor Highwind Captain Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Hulle Granz Cathedral Age: 33 Posts: 1,172	Re: The Friends of FFnet Blackstar and Hydra...you guys should do a poem together--you kick so much ass at it. XD; __________________ 'All games contain the idea of death.' --The Lords and the New Creatures

10-24-2007, 12:10 PM	#63
Hydra 3, 2, 1, Let's Jam Join Date: May 2006 Location: Maryland Posts: 8,560	Re: The Friends of FFnet I've been thinking about it, actually. It'd be fun, but I'm not sure if I have the time to really follow up, heh. I'll give you my answer in a little bit. __________________ LEft.

10-26-2007, 11:15 AM	#66
blackstar Headbanger For Life Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: TN Age: 33 Posts: 1,578	Re: The Friends of FFnet Yeah it doesnt alot of people but it sounded like a Nightwish or Blind Guardian song to me just a random observation. So who are your favorite poets?

11-19-2007, 06:30 PM	#68
blackstar Headbanger For Life Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: TN Age: 33 Posts: 1,578	Re: The Friends of FFnet Poe, im limited with Frost but honestly my gf is my favorite poet no joke shes really really good.

12-12-2007, 12:32 AM	#69
blackstar Headbanger For Life Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: TN Age: 33 Posts: 1,578	Re: The Friends of FFnet I reread my poem and it makes me really sad now seeing all the people who are gone. I really wish i knew how to get a hold of them. Tifa, Gackt, Empress, WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GUYS!

01-24-2008, 08:18 PM	#70
Bonesplitter Lord of the Dead Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: at the computer....sometimes Age: 33 Posts: 317	Re: The Friends of FFnet this a poem i did about 4 months ago empty im empty in side, theirs nothing left. my heart has been broken into tiny bits. i only found a piece. i gave that piece to someone i thought would fix it, repair it, make it whole again. i was wrong. i lost that piece forever, and with it...my heart. im empty and dead inside...no...theres something in me, something i want to let out, something i must let out, something im afriad to let out...but...if i keep it locked up it will hurt me. it will hurt others. the light of my soul has burned out, im an empty vessel. im alwas in pain. i dont want to be in pain. when im almost better i see her. she took the the only happiness i ever had. she ropped it out and killed it. i try to get away, i want to get away. i dont know why i still think of it,of her, and i wonder why do i hope of things i dont want, of things i think i dont want, but i know tha answer i wan my heart back, i want to let the pain out. i want someone to help me... i just want someone... __________________ They all come to me in the end

01-26-2008, 02:08 PM	#72
blackstar Headbanger For Life Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: TN Age: 33 Posts: 1,578	Re: The Friends of FFnet You do have a heart Colton that was really good though im impressed you never really caught me as the poetic type.

01-27-2008, 01:00 AM	#73
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 35 Posts: 2,769	Re: The Friends of FFnet kb did one to!!! - an overlord i met today an overlord grabed me and she said "hey" with a sweat body and a kind mind My glad I made the overlord mine..... ~kb-sama Ok i made two Ninja,Ninja in the sky Don't come down and make me die... With a Ninja Jump and a Ninja kick! Down i go,super quick not much but it's poem right? __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on" Last edited by kb-sama; 01-27-2008 at 01:05 AM.

01-27-2008, 05:55 AM	#74
Phoenix Flame Go Umbarbar do my bidding Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By myself. It's lonely ;-; Posts: 3,044	Re: The Friends of FFnet The Ninja poem made me giggle x3 __________________ Fight, if there is something to fight for. Never give in, or give up - but ALWAYS give. Choose your battles wisely. You only get one shot at life. Follow your heart.

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