Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 - Page 2

Doctor · 03-16-2008, 03:54 AM

Heh heh...that's a good poem indeed. =]

Down
Down
Down
they go.
Into the dark.
The beautiful
The witty
The brave
The lost.
Down
they go
the far-gone
into oblivion.

I wrote this when I was pondering what souls must go through once they die. The kind of journey they might take before reaching somehwere...if they go anywhere at all, that is.

Spec Highwind · 03-16-2008, 08:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phoenix Flame

0.0!

Que muito lindo o meu amigo! ...muito lindo. ^^;

I could read (and understand) about 2/3 of it...I think.

Is it for Ms. Vanessa? = d

BTW: I think you SHOULD translate it...it would be good in English also. xD; Just if you want.

Yes, it's for her. Translate it... hum... let's see xD

No -_- I tried to, it's impossible... there are verses which are untranslateable

Doctor · 03-18-2008, 01:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spec Highwind

Yes, it's for her. Translate it... hum... let's see xD

No -_- I tried to, it's impossible... there are verses which are untranslateable

That's a shame. =/

This is my Live Journal--the place where I have already put up a majority of my poetry. And saying that, if anyone wants to read my material, all they have to do is look here, as I update regularly. =P

http://nocturnal-dec.livejournal.com/

Yoko Kurama · 03-23-2008, 01:42 AM

Here is a poem that I wrote a while back...

The Realm of Dreams
I wait here for you
Though Time passes me by
Open your eyes
And I will be there
Cry out in the Darkness
And I will be waiting

In the chaotic maelstrom
That is our living world
Let us find a sanctuary
Where we may simply exist
We may lie in each other's warm embrace
And simply live and love
Seal our destinies with Love
Find solace in Passion

Step out of the Darkness
For Love is the Light
I speak to you in your dreams
Promising to be here when you awake
And if your eyes do not flutter open
I will wait until they do
My Sleeping Prince, the time to awake is now
For Love waits beyond the Realm of Dreams

I wrote this and sent it to a guy I like...I was trying to hint to him that I liked him... He didn't get it yet, but I don't plan on giving up...

Doctor · 03-24-2008, 02:22 AM

Ha ha, sometimes people don't understand the underlying message at first. But like you said yourself, don't give up. =P

I'm having writer's block. Does anyone happen to know a way to cure it? =/

darkshadow2247 · 03-24-2008, 07:20 PM

Probably the most abstract poem I have ever written.

"The Revolving Door/My Life"

I don't have to care
Though I should -
But -
I change with the seasons
Say hello to a new face
All revolving doors
For I am Mr. Rubik's greatest creation
Remember, "As the wind changes..."
Turn the page
Because everyone else -
Anyone else
Around me
Is just another sad face

**Phoenix Flame** · 04-06-2008, 05:13 AM

This one I wrote in 8th or 9th grade...

The Gift God's Giving
by John Hacker

I look at you, needless to say what goes through my mind;
Longingness, loveliness, godliness - these should I find
If I could open your heart, or stare into your soul.
If my lips could speak, they'd say that I'm a fool

Not to hold you, love you, or treasure you for who you are,
But rather decieve you and prove that I'm not par.
I would have died from loneliness or shame from disgrace
If God didn't come and show me His grace.

Now my eyes are opened, my soul: cleared, my worth: spoken.
We are part of His plan, and you - more than a token
Of His love for me. I can't begin to comprehend
His power, mercy and honor, the extent of which shall never end.

**Phoenix Flame** · 04-07-2008, 07:14 AM

...'nother one of mine I found recently from a LOOOONG time ago.

The Comforter
by: John Hacker

All is dark and dim and drear,

Yet I know the Comforter is near!

When all life's lonely shadows press in hard

He gives me strength to stand and guard

My life's hope - dreams and services -

All rent to pieces by my alternatives.

Give me Your grace this day, my Lord,

And keep at bay those who would do me harm

That I may press on towards the goal and mark,

Then I, from You, will never again feel apart.

**Phoenix Flame** · 04-11-2008, 02:00 AM

Fear and God

Fear encroaches the heart of every man,
But my God has set me free!
I no longer have to question His plan,
But follow, and wait, and see.

When uncertainty gives a hint of destruction,
And hell stands; its mouth ablaze and agape
Waiting in haste to ruin that function
Of the cross, was that gift a mistake?

NO! It hasn't failed through all these years.
I can't give up. I can't let things be.
For what hath love if it dies on unhearing ears?
I must tell them - they too can be free!

kb-sama · 04-11-2008, 05:22 PM

O-o Nice Work O' lord of Flame!

My next pome i kinda Furgot What kind of pome i was makeing so Bear With me ok?

Dhoulmagus~ great battle in the vast sky (this Title is missleading)

Calamity....the bringer of are Destiny...the world in ruins...only a few remain....one hero left to end this pain

Her name is Kanami....Cursed by her Destiny.....born of Dragon and of man.....her mother lay dead...her father slain

"Calamity...." She said......."we are the Same..........both of us have horns.......both of as have Wings......both of us cursed"

"yours is the purge of man.....mine was being born..." Kanami Has been Beaten her hole life for her looks ,Called a sin ,made to be a slave Just to have a home......

"if I Slay a goddess.......will they love me? Will they Call me hero? Will I have a home at last?"Kanami thought....... so off She Ran.....to slay this Goddess of death

Calamity Was Resting....on what was left of a Town.......Kanami Did not know How big she was...Calamity was Well over 7 stories tall Her body nude,markings Hid her beast......Kanami stopped to Look at her...."how could some thing so Beautiful Cause this purge?" she Thought....

"RISE DEMON!!"Kanami yelled...Calamity Got up Gently "Why do you Wake me young Dragon girl" Calamity Said

"I have come to End you Life Goddess! I care not if this is not your doing! you have kill millions of people!" Kanami yelled

"So you have come...to end your life young dragon girl Why? Man will Die, But you Will be saved.....if you Fight me You will die" Calamity Said sadly

"i was dead the day i was born......and why Would you save me, demon?"Knanmi said

"Because You Belong with us...fatima the home of the good...did you think Everyone on this world would die? "The good got to Fatima with the Demons.....There lifes are Far Better there....but the Evil...they Will all die...and so shell the world " Calamity said....

"NO!" "NEVER WILL I LIVE WITH YOUR KIND!!" Kanami yelled As she jumped at Calamity...With one Hand She Grabed Her "little one....You wish for a home...I shell give you one...You wish to be a hero,You will...you wished for love...you will have it"calamity Said "the demons of fatima Are not the monsters of story's they are just lke human..calm and loving...."

".....A home.....I'll be a hero....And love....."Kanami said....... There was then a flash....Kanami was on the ground...beautiful Plants and and Blue Skys..... She Gazed At them Then someone Held Her "Kanami.....I'll love you...in any Way you wish...as your mother...as your sister or as your lover"Kanami turned around and Saw calamity in a Smaller from "this is Fatima...the home of Good demons...your home" calamity said"you Are a Nomal Girl here...no longer cursed you are Still Part Dragon But now it's not A bad thing"
There was one more Flash.....They Where in a town with people Kanami looked out at them....she gasped....She saw dargon people,cat people and lots more.....She held Calamiy and Said "I love You...i'm not a monster anymore....." "so you will Stay Here With me?" Calamity Asked And Kanami Gave Her a kiss and said "yes"

~the end

(yes Yes i know i Suck at this)

Spec Highwind · 04-11-2008, 06:41 PM

Let me see if I can translate my last poem to English (well, you MUST understand that it's not the same thing, right? It will also stop rhyming)

The vibrant sky,
Cyan,
Distant,
Inhuman.

The ressonant blood,
In my veins,
Burning,
In webs. (as in divided like a web ^^")

The dripping sweat,
Scars,
Ardent,
Martirizes.

The leading pace,
Time,
Addicting,
Field.

And I,
Unexpectedly,
Wait
Patiently.

The rhyme is supposedly ABAB

kb-sama · 04-14-2008, 05:50 PM

Your Good at this Highwind

Heres My newest one

I tryied some thing New Here So Hope u like it

Not a rhyme

A song

this is it, this is the last hour This is it ,are final Hour

For On this night the End come

Save us mother

Save Us mother

Save us Father

Save Us Father

For The beast Comes on this Holy night

To Destroy Us all

Blood Spilled Lives Ended Hopes Crushed Children lay Dead

Save us mother

Save us Father

Save us mother

Save us Father

His name We Dare not Say.......

the Demons Fear him......

The angels Run From Him......

Save us mother

Save us Father

Save us mother

Save us Father

For the Demon god Disaster Come on this Holy night

His Daughter Came To us Hoping For Piece

And she was Kill By The Leader of are town Because She would Not Let him Take her

Because of the fool

we all die

Because of the fool

we all die .....

**Phoenix Flame** · 04-15-2008, 12:02 AM

Hmm... I likes. ;p

kb-sama · 04-15-2008, 12:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phoenix Flame

Hmm... I likes. ;p

O_O

NO WAY IN HELL!!! YOU LIKE KB'S work!?!?

SO...HAPPY!!!

Spec Highwind · 04-15-2008, 05:31 PM

Actually, he was talking about mine <_<

j/k xD

03-16-2008, 03:54 AM	#16
Doctor Highwind Captain Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Hulle Granz Cathedral Age: 33 Posts: 1,172	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 Heh heh...that's a good poem indeed. =] Down Down Down they go. Into the dark. The beautiful The witty The brave The lost. Down they go the far-gone into oblivion. I wrote this when I was pondering what souls must go through once they die. The kind of journey they might take before reaching somehwere...if they go anywhere at all, that is. __________________ 'All games contain the idea of death.' --The Lords and the New Creatures

03-23-2008, 01:42 AM	#19
Yoko Kurama With a shattered heart... Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Hollow Bastion/Radiant Garden Age: 33 Posts: 428	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 Here is a poem that I wrote a while back... The Realm of Dreams I wait here for you Though Time passes me by Open your eyes And I will be there Cry out in the Darkness And I will be waiting In the chaotic maelstrom That is our living world Let us find a sanctuary Where we may simply exist We may lie in each other's warm embrace And simply live and love Seal our destinies with Love Find solace in Passion Step out of the Darkness For Love is the Light I speak to you in your dreams Promising to be here when you awake And if your eyes do not flutter open I will wait until they do My Sleeping Prince, the time to awake is now For Love waits beyond the Realm of Dreams I wrote this and sent it to a guy I like...I was trying to hint to him that I liked him... He didn't get it yet, but I don't plan on giving up...

03-24-2008, 02:22 AM	#20
Doctor Highwind Captain Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Hulle Granz Cathedral Age: 33 Posts: 1,172	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 Ha ha, sometimes people don't understand the underlying message at first. But like you said yourself, don't give up. =P I'm having writer's block. Does anyone happen to know a way to cure it? =/ __________________ 'All games contain the idea of death.' --The Lords and the New Creatures

04-06-2008, 05:13 AM	#22
Phoenix Flame Go Umbarbar do my bidding Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By myself. It's lonely ;-; Posts: 3,044	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 This one I wrote in 8th or 9th grade... The Gift God's Giving by John Hacker I look at you, needless to say what goes through my mind; Longingness, loveliness, godliness - these should I find If I could open your heart, or stare into your soul. If my lips could speak, they'd say that I'm a fool Not to hold you, love you, or treasure you for who you are, But rather decieve you and prove that I'm not par. I would have died from loneliness or shame from disgrace If God didn't come and show me His grace. Now my eyes are opened, my soul: cleared, my worth: spoken. We are part of His plan, and you - more than a token Of His love for me. I can't begin to comprehend His power, mercy and honor, the extent of which shall never end. __________________ Fight, if there is something to fight for. Never give in, or give up - but ALWAYS give. Choose your battles wisely. You only get one shot at life. Follow your heart.

04-07-2008, 07:14 AM	#23
Phoenix Flame Go Umbarbar do my bidding Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By myself. It's lonely ;-; Posts: 3,044	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 ...'nother one of mine I found recently from a LOOOONG time ago. The Comforter by: John Hacker All is dark and dim and drear, Yet I know the Comforter is near! When all life's lonely shadows press in hard He gives me strength to stand and guard My life's hope - dreams and services - All rent to pieces by my alternatives. Give me Your grace this day, my Lord, And keep at bay those who would do me harm That I may press on towards the goal and mark, Then I, from You, will never again feel apart. __________________ Fight, if there is something to fight for. Never give in, or give up - but ALWAYS give. Choose your battles wisely. You only get one shot at life. Follow your heart.

04-11-2008, 02:00 AM	#24
Phoenix Flame Go Umbarbar do my bidding Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By myself. It's lonely ;-; Posts: 3,044	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 Fear and God Fear encroaches the heart of every man, But my God has set me free! I no longer have to question His plan, But follow, and wait, and see. When uncertainty gives a hint of destruction, And hell stands; its mouth ablaze and agape Waiting in haste to ruin that function Of the cross, was that gift a mistake? NO! It hasn't failed through all these years. I can't give up. I can't let things be. For what hath love if it dies on unhearing ears? I must tell them - they too can be free! __________________ Fight, if there is something to fight for. Never give in, or give up - but ALWAYS give. Choose your battles wisely. You only get one shot at life. Follow your heart.

04-11-2008, 05:22 PM	#25
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 34 Posts: 2,769	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 O-o Nice Work O' lord of Flame! My next pome i kinda Furgot What kind of pome i was makeing so Bear With me ok? Dhoulmagus~ great battle in the vast sky (this Title is missleading) Calamity....the bringer of are Destiny...the world in ruins...only a few remain....one hero left to end this pain Her name is Kanami....Cursed by her Destiny.....born of Dragon and of man.....her mother lay dead...her father slain "Calamity...." She said......."we are the Same..........both of us have horns.......both of as have Wings......both of us cursed" "yours is the purge of man.....mine was being born..." Kanami Has been Beaten her hole life for her looks ,Called a sin ,made to be a slave Just to have a home...... "if I Slay a goddess.......will they love me? Will they Call me hero? Will I have a home at last?"Kanami thought....... so off She Ran.....to slay this Goddess of death Calamity Was Resting....on what was left of a Town.......Kanami Did not know How big she was...Calamity was Well over 7 stories tall Her body nude,markings Hid her beast......Kanami stopped to Look at her...."how could some thing so Beautiful Cause this purge?" she Thought.... "RISE DEMON!!"Kanami yelled...Calamity Got up Gently "Why do you Wake me young Dragon girl" Calamity Said "I have come to End you Life Goddess! I care not if this is not your doing! you have kill millions of people!" Kanami yelled "So you have come...to end your life young dragon girl Why? Man will Die, But you Will be saved.....if you Fight me You will die" Calamity Said sadly "i was dead the day i was born......and why Would you save me, demon?"Knanmi said "Because You Belong with us...fatima the home of the good...did you think Everyone on this world would die? "The good got to Fatima with the Demons.....There lifes are Far Better there....but the Evil...they Will all die...and so shell the world " Calamity said.... "NO!" "NEVER WILL I LIVE WITH YOUR KIND!!" Kanami yelled As she jumped at Calamity...With one Hand She Grabed Her "little one....You wish for a home...I shell give you one...You wish to be a hero,You will...you wished for love...you will have it"calamity Said "the demons of fatima Are not the monsters of story's they are just lke human..calm and loving...." ".....A home.....I'll be a hero....And love....."Kanami said....... There was then a flash....Kanami was on the ground...beautiful Plants and and Blue Skys..... She Gazed At them Then someone Held Her "Kanami.....I'll love you...in any Way you wish...as your mother...as your sister or as your lover"Kanami turned around and Saw calamity in a Smaller from "this is Fatima...the home of Good demons...your home" calamity said"you Are a Nomal Girl here...no longer cursed you are Still Part Dragon But now it's not A bad thing" There was one more Flash.....They Where in a town with people Kanami looked out at them....she gasped....She saw dargon people,cat people and lots more.....She held Calamiy and Said "I love You...i'm not a monster anymore....." "so you will Stay Here With me?" Calamity Asked And Kanami Gave Her a kiss and said "yes" ~the end (yes Yes i know i Suck at this) __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on"

04-14-2008, 05:50 PM	#27
kb-sama Master Summoner Join Date: May 2007 Location: Lost In The Item World Age: 34 Posts: 2,769	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 Your Good at this Highwind Heres My newest one I tryied some thing New Here So Hope u like it Not a rhyme A song this is it, this is the last hour This is it ,are final Hour For On this night the End come Save us mother Save Us mother Save us Father Save Us Father For The beast Comes on this Holy night To Destroy Us all Blood Spilled Lives Ended Hopes Crushed Children lay Dead Save us mother Save us Father Save us mother Save us Father His name We Dare not Say....... the Demons Fear him...... The angels Run From Him...... Save us mother Save us Father Save us mother Save us Father For the Demon god Disaster Come on this Holy night His Daughter Came To us Hoping For Piece And she was Kill By The Leader of are town Because She would Not Let him Take her Because of the fool we all die Because of the fool we all die ..... __________________ "I Have No Idea Whats Go'in on"

04-15-2008, 12:02 AM	#28
Phoenix Flame Go Umbarbar do my bidding Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By myself. It's lonely ;-; Posts: 3,044	Re: Poetry Thread ver. 2.0 Hmm... I likes. ;p __________________ Fight, if there is something to fight for. Never give in, or give up - but ALWAYS give. Choose your battles wisely. You only get one shot at life. Follow your heart.

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