Mage Stories

Black Mage · 12-12-2005, 09:52 PM

Hey I'm starting a story that contains characters from Final Fantasy and stuff like that. The main charcters are well Black Mages like my avatar. They live in a Town called Element Town. The town is filled with only monsters and not one human is alound to enter the village. One day the town was attacked by warriors and was burnt to the ground. The only surrviver was a little mage named Mill. Mill is now a young boy who lives in a new town with foster parents. He now wants to set off on a journey to take revenge for his old village and friends and family he once had.

Some characters he will meet on his journey are: Cactuar, Chocobo, Goblins, and many other creatures of Final Fantasy

So any tips on what I should do with the story???? Please tell me.

Black Mage · 12-12-2005, 11:12 PM

Come on people say something!!

ShadowHeart · 12-13-2005, 11:17 AM

Give it some time. You've waited little over an hour.. most people only log in here like once or twice a day, if even that, so give it some time..

**Phoenix Flame** · 12-13-2005, 02:36 PM

Well, along the way, Mill should encounter some hardships and things to do with his past (like all heros.) Maybe you could write something about him running into a warrior who points him in the direction of the town of the warriors who slew his village - Just before he fries him with a Fire 3 spell

Black Mage · 12-13-2005, 05:04 PM

Sounds cool...But can you think of a better name than Gill? I mean its a stupid name for him so if you or anyone else can think of a new name for Gill.

darkmajinvegeta · 03-04-2006, 12:42 PM

are a black mage a human or a monster

baralai · 03-04-2006, 01:26 PM

a human

darkmajinvegeta · 03-04-2006, 02:26 PM

yes im now but they are so shy

baralai · 03-04-2006, 02:27 PM

why you think that for they got a big hat?

Zeromus_X · 03-04-2006, 03:56 PM

Okay, spamming is not allowed, as is chatting between two members. Please take it to PMs.

Forum Rules

darkmajinvegeta · 03-05-2006, 10:23 AM

red mages are cool and black some cool

Fire Lord · 07-13-2006, 11:39 PM

sorry but i'm not in 5to mages

Zeromus_X · 07-13-2006, 11:42 PM

Again, this thread is really old and I doubt that member comes here anymore. (I should've closed it when the spamming kids came along, but oh well.) Thread closed.

12-12-2005, 09:52 PM	#1
Black Mage Vivi's Minder Join Date: Dec 2005 Age: 34 Posts: 44	Mage Stories Hey I'm starting a story that contains characters from Final Fantasy and stuff like that. The main charcters are well Black Mages like my avatar. They live in a Town called Element Town. The town is filled with only monsters and not one human is alound to enter the village. One day the town was attacked by warriors and was burnt to the ground. The only surrviver was a little mage named Mill. Mill is now a young boy who lives in a new town with foster parents. He now wants to set off on a journey to take revenge for his old village and friends and family he once had. Some characters he will meet on his journey are: Cactuar, Chocobo, Goblins, and many other creatures of Final Fantasy So any tips on what I should do with the story???? Please tell me. __________________ Someone looked into a black Mage's eyes and saw something. They didn't see a monster but, they saw monster who needed a friend. Visit the Black Mage Guild for more stories.

12-12-2005, 11:12 PM	#2
Black Mage Vivi's Minder Join Date: Dec 2005 Age: 34 Posts: 44	Re: Mage Stories Come on people say something!! __________________ Someone looked into a black Mage's eyes and saw something. They didn't see a monster but, they saw monster who needed a friend. Visit the Black Mage Guild for more stories.

12-13-2005, 11:17 AM	#3
ShadowHeart Master Summoner Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Sweden Age: 42 Posts: 1,730	Re: Mage Stories Give it some time. You've waited little over an hour.. most people only log in here like once or twice a day, if even that, so give it some time.. __________________ And then there was silence Just a voice from the other world Like a leaf in any icy world Memories will fade

12-13-2005, 02:36 PM	#4
Phoenix Flame Go Umbarbar do my bidding Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By myself. It's lonely ;-; Posts: 3,044	Re: Mage Stories Well, along the way, Mill should encounter some hardships and things to do with his past (like all heros.) Maybe you could write something about him running into a warrior who points him in the direction of the town of the warriors who slew his village - Just before he fries him with a Fire 3 spell

12-13-2005, 05:04 PM	#5
Black Mage Vivi's Minder Join Date: Dec 2005 Age: 34 Posts: 44	Re: Mage Stories Sounds cool...But can you think of a better name than Gill? I mean its a stupid name for him so if you or anyone else can think of a new name for Gill. __________________ Someone looked into a black Mage's eyes and saw something. They didn't see a monster but, they saw monster who needed a friend. Visit the Black Mage Guild for more stories.

03-04-2006, 12:42 PM	#6
darkmajinvegeta Moogle Farmer Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: sweden Age: 30 Posts: 180	Re: Mage Stories are a black mage a human or a monster __________________ im the prince of saiyans die kakarott

03-04-2006, 01:26 PM	#7
baralai Moogle Farmer Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sweden Age: 30 Posts: 150	Re: Mage Stories a human __________________ a cool Cactuar moviePress here to look or Press this or This one is not a copy of the first one... Or this one Or this one

03-04-2006, 02:26 PM	#8
darkmajinvegeta Moogle Farmer Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: sweden Age: 30 Posts: 180	Re: Mage Stories yes im now but they are so shy __________________ im the prince of saiyans die kakarott

03-04-2006, 02:27 PM	#9
baralai Moogle Farmer Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sweden Age: 30 Posts: 150	Re: Mage Stories why you think that for they got a big hat? __________________ a cool Cactuar moviePress here to look or Press this or This one is not a copy of the first one... Or this one Or this one

03-04-2006, 03:56 PM	#10
Zeromus_X Master Summoner Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Core of the Moon (Phoenix, AZ) Age: 96 Posts: 2,931	Re: Mage Stories Okay, spamming is not allowed, as is chatting between two members. Please take it to PMs. Forum Rules

03-05-2006, 10:23 AM	#11
darkmajinvegeta Moogle Farmer Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: sweden Age: 30 Posts: 180	Re: Mage Stories red mages are cool and black some cool __________________ im the prince of saiyans die kakarott

07-13-2006, 11:39 PM	#12
Fire Lord Vivi's Minder Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 28	Re: Mage Stories sorry but i'm not in 5to mages

07-13-2006, 11:42 PM	#13
Zeromus_X Master Summoner Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Core of the Moon (Phoenix, AZ) Age: 96 Posts: 2,931	Re: Mage Stories Again, this thread is really old and I doubt that member comes here anymore. (I should've closed it when the spamming kids came along, but oh well.) Thread closed.

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