Mage Stories

[Black Mage]

Hey I'm starting a story that contains characters from Final Fantasy and stuff like that. The main charcters are well Black Mages like my avatar. They live in a Town called Element Town. The town is filled with only monsters and not one human is alound to enter the village. One day the town was attacked by warriors and was burnt to the ground. The only surrviver was a little mage named Mill. Mill is now a young boy who lives in a new town with foster parents. He now wants to set off on a journey to take revenge for his old village and friends and family he once had.

Some characters he will meet on his journey are: Cactuar, Chocobo, Goblins, and many other creatures of Final Fantasy

So any tips on what I should do with the story???? Please tell me.

 

[Black Mage]

Come on people say something!!

 

[ShadowHeart]

Give it some time. You've waited little over an hour.. most people only log in here like once or twice a day, if even that, so give it some time..

 

[Phoenix Flame]

Well, along the way, Mill should encounter some hardships and things to do with his past (like all heros.) Maybe you could write something about him running into a warrior who points him in the direction of the town of the warriors who slew his village - Just before he fries him with a Fire 3 spell

 

[Black Mage]

Sounds cool...But can you think of a better name than Gill? I mean its a stupid name for him so if you or anyone else can think of a new name for Gill.

 

[darkmajinvegeta]

are a black mage a human or a monster

 

[baralai]

a human

 

[darkmajinvegeta]

yes im now but they are so shy

 

[baralai]

why you think that for they got a big hat?

 

[Zeromus_X]

Okay, spamming is not allowed, as is chatting between two members. Please take it to PMs.

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[darkmajinvegeta]

red mages are cool and black some cool

 

[Fire Lord]

sorry but i'm not in 5to mages

 

[Zeromus_X]

Again, this thread is really old and I doubt that member comes here anymore. (I should've closed it when the spamming kids came along, but oh well.) Thread closed.